I do what I can, but sometimes I don’t make sense

Finally got all of Audrey’s notes transferred to sticky notes on the printed manuscript. And after some emails back and forth with her, I’ve planned out the most extensive part of this edit. The fix I finally came up with is quite a bit more work than I originally wanted to do, so it’s gonna be a painful process, but it’s gonna fix so many problems in its wake, and the book’ll be so much better when I’m done.